User:AnonaStudent/2017 Oregon wildfires/Carlymendz Peer Review

I think that the chart takes away from the article. if it was put in the article as a paragraph, and someone explained it differently, it would be easier for readers.
add pictures where it shows the effects from the ground, and not an aerial view. it connects the reader to the wildfire more, because they can see the disaster through their own eyes.

a map would work if you wanted to show where in Oregon had wildfires, and see how big of a fire it started off as and then become.

you can also add the cause of the fire and the effect; aka people's livelihood and what was the causing factor to the fires