User:Anongeologist/1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami/Alwyn2105 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anongeologist


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anongeologist/1958_Lituya_Bay_earthquake_and_megatsunami?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the drafted changes this group did for the 1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami article seem pretty good. For all of the new information that the group provided, they gave a reference to cite their information. For the "Magnitude of Damage" section, they did not provide a reference for the figure they gave. They said "The mega tsunami flooded Lituya Bay and created a damage line at around 700 feet around the outline of the bay." I could not find a source for this statement but all of the other links seem to work. Something that they could add to this article is the importance of Lituya Bay to people living nearby. It might be helpful to talk about the aftermath of this earthquake and mega tsunami and how it may have affected the people living near there.

 Peer review response 

Thanks for evaluating our article and I agree with everything you said. We will work on adding a reference for the figure under the “Magnitude of Damage” section. We will make sure to review everything and add all the sources that we missed. I think that it is a great idea to add the topics you mentioned such as the aftermath, and how the earthquake affected people living nearby, so we will look into that more. I love all the ideas you gave us and look forward to improving our article! -Lydia