User:Anongeologist/1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami/Johnskae Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anongeologist, Teddykoronios1234, Zoeroros, Amoreland22, 2003la


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anongeologist/1958_Lituya_Bay_earthquake_and_megatsunami?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami

Evaluate the drafted changes
== First of all i would like to start by saying that I totally agree that the history of past events sections is lacking. Most of it is written unclear and barely any citations for what had been written. Also, it is extremely monotone and not engaging whatsoever. Also, the rest of the article is written in paragraph form and this is written in bullets? I think you should try to keep it consistent throughout. There is nothing wrong with the lead or tone of the article except in the one section. Also, I think you guys are trying to do a little bit in every section rather than all contributing to one section to make it much better. You guys definitely have a good start with your ideas draft but your next steps should be researching those topics you listed to make sure that information could be used in the final article. I think it is also important to keep track of the links you use so it makes it easier to cite when you are adding to the actual article. Also, the addition of better pictures could be very beneficial like you mentioned doing. Good luck! ==

Peer Review Response
== I definitely agree with you that the history section of previous events looks so out of place and needs a lot of work. It does not look like enough effort was put into that section and it is lacking citations. Honestly, we may have to completely rewrite that whole section. I am glad you think our group is off to a good start. We have the topics listed that we want to investigate, but like you said we need to collect more information to be able to make a significant addition to the article. Thank you for your feedback. I had not even noticed how empty the past tectonic events section was until you mentioned it. -Zoe ==