User:Anongeologist/1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami/Nateherbkersman Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anongeologist/1958_Lituya_Bay_earthquake_and_megatsunami?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * 1958 Lituya Bay earthquake and megatsunami

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I agree with everything you said in your evaluation of the article. A few things that I thought were specifically important were your interpretations of the 'history of past events' section, and how it seems underdeveloped. That being said, I don't see anything about how you plan on improving it (probably just hasn't been added yet, but still). Other than that, I like everything else with your current draft. The image you included would definitely be of use, and should be implemented into the article along with an explanation of its purpose. All other added information and sources seem relevant and credible. I like how you thought of adding a second eyewitness account as well. This seems like a good idea, and would provide a greater understanding of the event for the reader.

Zach's reply
This is my reply....\ Thakny you for your kind words.