User:AnonymousIpad/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Geographer

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Geography was one of my favourite subjects in high school. I was once wanted to become a geographer, or doing a job related to geography. Therefore, I realized the importance for the most easily accessible source to be reliable and informative as it would be the first guide for many children who wanted to pursue their future in this subject area. The article is generally informative and give an overview of the subject details, history, categories, and links for further research. However, the major component of the article are the list of famous geographer, which is imbalance with the content.

Evaluate the article
The article gave out a clear and concise lead section, which is introducing the reader to the definition of geography and a brief history of it. In addition to the details, there is a sentence regarding the painting, which seems unrelate to the major content. Nonetheless, it captivates the reader to continue reading. Generally, the content describes the overview of the subject, which is not been changed to the noticable extent within the past decade. The references are mostly books and journals, which were written in 20th century, with usable links. However, the content organization in this article is imbalance, since almost half of the article is the list of famous geographer, which should only be the supplementary content. The writing style is simple and readable with non-biased tone. Regarding the media usage, this article does not insert and utilize picture efficiently. The whole article contains three picture, two of them are the drawing of geographer. The only compatible picture is the old map in the history section. Nevertheless, they do not violate copyright rule since all works were created in approximately 16th century. The talk page contains several discussion of parts throughout the article about link modification. Some of the editors talk about the section regarding painting should not be placed in the lead section, however, there is no major edit to this particular section. To summarize, this article was written in the simple style with neutral tone. Some of the content are arguably misplaced and more information such as the detail of geographer in nowadays could be added no strengthen the content.