User:Anonymous - JJH 8/Agenda-setting theory/Efs20 Peer Review

General info
The work I am peer-reviewing is for Airalia, Amandalonsoo, Anonymous - JJH 8, SpaceWax.
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Anonymous - JJH 8/Agenda-setting theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Agenda-setting theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes in your sandbox will provide and add to the article a complete overiview of agenda setting theory. To begin, your drafted changed is well-organized and structured and provdes to the reader a clear presentation of the topic. Secondly, you provide a extensive explanation of different analysis' and your sources. Lastly the references used throughout your draft are credible and are relevant to the topic.

That being said, I would also suggest a few minor suggestions. Try adding more citations throughout the text from a specific author or study. This will make your draft more credible and provide the reader with more clarity (evidence). Continuing from before, with the addition of in text citations, the content you already provided can be expanded upon and explained more thoroughly. Great job!