User:Anonymous microbe/Bacillus cereus/Asherkhan5284 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jmoyang58, Danimahoney, Is73500, Anonymous microbe


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anonymous%20microbe/Bacillus_cereus?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bacillus cereus

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content was easy to read and understand. The beginning of the "Ecology" section is well written so that the reader knows the origin of Bacillus cereus and how it functions. I feel that the "Diseases in Aquatic Animals" and the "Diagnosis" sections could be expanded. Maybe include more than one animal and how Bacillus cereus can cause infections and what it means for the overall population of that animal of aquatic animals in general. The article seems balanced as there are both positives and negatives to the bacteria. It seems organized throughout as one topic leads to another (ex. Ecology then Reproduction, then Pathogenesis, etc.). The references are properly used to support claims in the article. Overall, the article seems good, but adding more detail in the less emphasized area would make it a great article as it would provide even more information about Bacillus cereus.