User:Anonymous microbe/Bacillus cereus/Bab35555 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Bacillus cereus
 * Bacillus cereus

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it would be a good idea to add more content to the History section of the article that exists. It looks like there are only a couple sentences under this topic, but it would be helpful to other learners if your group was able to find more information to include there. Just an idea, but maybe changing the section called In agriculture to something that pertains to the research of the microbe today? Is it being studied in a lab? For what purpose? Does it have any benefits in industry?