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Which article are you evaluating?
Culture of Peace

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
The title of the article was interesting and had a powerful meaning. I initially thought it would talk about how multiple cultures define peace and how they apply it to their life, but it talked about a different concept. This article enables us to stop and think about the multiple things happening outside of our bubble and what people are doing out there to promote helpful actions.

Evaluate the article
The article is clear and direct, explaining different concepts with well-written grammar. It did not seem to have a summary or conclusion to end the article with, nor did it explain the reason behind why this campaign was started by the UN organization. The article had no images or discussion posts; however, the references worked well and were accurately described. Overall, this article was good but was not written in a way that would attract readers. Moreover, it needs to have more background information on how or why this campaign was initially created.