User:Anonymousardvark/Social media and identity/Adg21a Peer Review

Amanda Golson Peer Review Article 2

First and foremost I found it difficult to differentiate the changes from the original article. Perhaps underlining or highlighting your additions would help those reviewing your work to make better suggestions and comparisons.

A link to the media literacy page would be helpful for the reader to understand that topic more before continuing to read your article. You included the effects on teenagers and young adults but further research on other age groups would be beneficial and make that section more complete.

I would add information surrounding the impacts of other social media platforms, not just snapchat. You could make this its own separate section and describe the impacts of each.

I liked the addition of the theory and schemas in the Body Image section but think they could be reworked to flow with the article a little better.

Some photos/graphics could help elevate this page by making it more appealing and interactive.

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