User:Anonymousardvark/Social media and identity/Anonymous - JJH 8 Peer Review

General info
Anonymousardvark
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anonymousardvark/Social_media_and_identity/Anonymous%20-%20JJH%208_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social media and identity

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * This article is solid all the way through. The sources are solid and are not copied and pasted. The lead to the article is good and it incorporates the added sections, to go along with the sections that are already there. After reading the initial article and comparing the sandbox draft, the additions are noticeable and it flows well. As far as grammar and punctuation goes, the use of "ly" words were a bit much. I found 12 instances were those words were used. Although it can be hard not to use these types of words, I would cut the use down to a few. All relevant sections are have been added to the article add a good quality to the overall article.