User:Anonymouse678/Minos/CabbageP Peer Review

General info
Anonymouse678
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Anonymouse678/Minos
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Minos

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * I like what you added to the main paragraph - need to cite it though
 * Are you going to keep the part about the archaeologist in the lead?

Content


 * How are you working your additions into the article? Where do these additios go within the text?
 * The "Family" section reads a bit unclear, I'm not sure what you're trying to say. Could be reworded
 * I like the edits to the "Mythological Minos" section, it reads better

Tone and Balance


 * Additions have remained neutral thus far
 * May need to change "historians have widely believed.." in the lead section

Sources and References


 * It looks like you only have references for ~2 of the sections so far, adding citations will help improve your article.
 * Could use more sources
 * In the "Mythological Minos" section change the in-text citation of the Odyssey to a hyperlinked citation
 * Change any and all intext citations to hyperlinked citations

Organization


 * How are you planning to organize the article? Are you planning to move anything?
 * I think moving "Literary Minos" to below "Mythical Minos" would improve the flow of the article

Images and Media


 * Where are you placing the new image?
 * Could add images to "Astronomy" and "Mythological Minos" sections

OverallOverall you've made a good start and have a solid plan for how to improve your article. Continue with that and keep adding more sources to everything. Some minor ogranizational changes and the addition of media could also help. So far additions to the content have been good and have improved the article quality. Keep up the good work :)