User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer/Avengers2015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anoshah04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anoshah04/Treatment_of_cancer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Treatment of cancer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It seems like you are moving in positive direction of your wikipedia edit. I think your lead looks good. Although, you have added the topic sentence, but I would suggest you to ad some more information about your topic sentences. Rather than adding just the topic sentence in the article, i would suggest you to add more information about that topic, so that reader can get to know about that topic. Apart of al this your all sources looks good. I would suggest you to organize your topic sentence before editing in a proper manner. Your content looks good, but i think you should add 1 or 2 more topic into your content so that it will be proper wikipedia edit.