User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer/Jand1990 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Anoshah04
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Anoshah04/Treatment_of_cancer?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Treatment of Cancer

Evaluate the drafted changes
By reading your draft, I am able to tell that your work will be organized and consistent. Rather than toning down the level of vocabulary, I suggest using synonyms that appear professional. I also recommend adding more information to the category in your article titled, "Mental Struggles/Pain". I believe it would be interesting for your audience to read and learn more about. I liked the number of categories present in your article, it makes the work as a whole easy to read.