User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer/Kkio77 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anoshah04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Treatment of cancer - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The editor provided suggestions to what the article needs but did not really give examples or explanations to how to go about those suggestions. The editor did begin to explain chemotherapy and hormonal therapy but not enough to get an article going. More work can be done but it was a great start.