User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer/Sprygrocki Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Anoshah04


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Anoshah04/Treatment of cancer


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Treatment of cancer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your draft looks really good. It is easy to understand and very informative about the topic of the original article. The sentences are also constructed well and flow well. goo job! :)