User:Ansan500/Child care/IonaMink Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ansan500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ansan500/Child_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child care

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead section is concise and gives an adequate overview of the article. My one recommendation is that the author incorporates a synopsis of the topics that will be covered.

Content: The new content is relevant, up-to date and clear. The author provides clear examples of the childcare situation in Canada, Denmark, France, Norway and Spain. Tone and Balance: The tone remained balanced during the entire article and no viewpoint is overrepresented. In general the is neutral, however I would re-phrase or perhaps add evidence to support the claim that "Norway is one of the best countries to raise a child." According to whom? Add citation.

Sources and Referencing: The sources are current, diverse and seem to be reliable.

Organization: The organization is good; I especially liked how each country had its own section with a new header. The article flows well.