User:Ansan500/Child care/Plantl0v3r Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ansan500


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ansan500/Child_care?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Child care

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead that was added for the purpose of the research answers all the aforementioned guiding questions and it does include gender. It provides the reader with a brief description of what the article will discuss.

Content
The content that was added is relevant and up to date. It was a good idea to add content concerning COVID-19, as COVID-19 had a huge impact on child care and what that means for working women and mothers. This is especially considering that women and mothers are those who are societally expected to be the ones to stay home and take care of the children; being a caregiver is a full time job that women are expected to take on. Overall, I believe that this draft was a great start to editing the Child care Wikipedia page.

Tone and Balance
The content added was perfectly neutral.

Sources and References
All of the references used are reliable sources of information. They were all used equally in the sandbox draft and they are up to date.

Organization
Everything that was added made sense as far as the organization of the content.