User:Ansleyb/Hope Barrett/Callencamp Peer Review

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I see there is a section ready for a lead which is great! I like how there are sections for her biography and career. I really like how all the issues are placed and want to use that format for my own page! Great that she has worked with many people to show her credibility. I think this is a great start! Next, continue with the lead and a blurb about Deneuve Magazine, which I see you have already created sections for which is awesome! Maybe see if you can find out what Hope is currently doing, try putting a picture if you can, and say what her most recent work is. Great neutral tone and great organization as well. GREAT JOB!