User:Anth 382 Project/Cultural translation/LewiscaSSU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anth 382 Project


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cultural_translation&oldid=1057821744


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cultural translation

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good start by fixing up the language, to continue try adding links to other Wikipedia articles, and see if you can find a place to add a citation, something like the Hill reading to relate to cultural change or Shilling Estes to relate to the model of the language change that could lead to differences between cultures. Nichols could be good here too about how meanings change between cultures.