User:AnthonyG5480/Millet (Ottoman Empire)/Creek3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AnthonyG5480


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:AnthonyG5480/Millet_(Ottoman_Empire)?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template



Evaluate the drafted changes
I agree with the other evaluations proposals on some minor changes in wording. Content wise I think this adds more depth to the article that is currently lacking. It uses both Sharkey and the other source effectively to make your points. You may also want to tie in how the resistance to these reforms played out in the long run, maybe describing it as a precursor to the nationalist movements that would pop up later that century. Overall very good.