User:AnthonyG5480/Millet (Ottoman Empire)/Mjc6876 Peer Review

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AnthonyG5480


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 * Editing User:AnthonyG5480/Millet (Ottoman Empire) - Wikipedia


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 * Millet (Ottoman Empire) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Seems solid although I'd reccomend using "Eastern Catholic" instead of "Uniate" as it has negative connotations Uniate Churches | Encyclopedia.com. I'd also recommend reading sentences out loud after or while writing to help. "Many clerics of the millet system pushed back against these reforms due to this reason as it was meant to weakens millets and the specialized power they had built for themselves." Could use some treatment to read better.