User:Anthonyhcole/sandbox

Once finished, the table below will be presented to Wikipedia's editors on the Parkinson's disease talk page, so they may incorporate the proposed changes in the article. Some of my (AHC's) comments in the right hand column are aimed at the Wikipedia editors, explaining/arguing for the proposed changes.

Please don't edit the left hand column: I'll add proposed changes.

To join the discussion, create an account here. It takes one minute. Use your name followed by "(BMJ reviewer)" like this: Joe Bloggs (BMJ reviewer). Then (If you're using Firefox 43 or 44, do 1 and 2 but then hit "return" or "enter" instead of double-clicking.)
 * 1) click the "edit" (not "edit source") tab at the top of the page (between "read" and "view history")
 * 2) single-left-click the cell you want to comment in (the cell will go blue)
 * 3) double-left-click the cell.

Please leave a space between your comment and the preceding one, and initial your comments.

I have only included paragraphs that reviewers have commented on or proposed changes to.

I'm still looking for sources to support proposed changes, and will add them as I find them.

If you'd like to do this on an aeroplane (or anywhere else offline), I'll keep this Word version of this page up to date. Download it before you fly, and email it to me when you're done. I'll add your comments to the conversation here. For a pdf of the full current version of the article (without any of our changes) click here --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 10:27, 16 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Reviewing offline

Reviewers

 * David Burn
 * Mark (MK)
 * Anthony Lang (AEL)
 * Andrew Lees
 * Mark Stacy (MS)

Wikipedia facilitators

 * Anthony Cole (AHC)
 * Stuart Ray User:soupvector (SR)