User:Anthro Lover/Demonic Males/Leilakinson Peer Review

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Anthro Lover


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you emphasized the feminist theories in your response. It was interesting how you related this overview to the hippie culture. I noticed a misspelled word; ‘divers’ which should have been ‘diverse’. The misspelling confused me momentarily as to what was being described. To improve this article, you could have provided more explanation about how feminism influenced the interpretation of bonobo behaviors. I think you could bring in some of the theories from our readings. I found this article interesting in that the subject matter was so different from the article I reviewed.