User:Anthro Lover/Demonic Males/Venturca Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anthro Lover's


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Demonic Males

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great Job! Anthro Lover added a large paragraph that explains the relationships between humans, bonobos, and warfare, as was in their presentation.

Information added to topic was clear, neutral, and added a large amount of information to this topic.

Also added relevant and working sources to topic

The overall tone of the edit is similar to the natural flow of the article and substantiates the topic in greater fashion.

My overall impressions is good job, good links, clear, neutral, accurately displays information.