User:AntonioAlmaT/Mozingo Lake/William parker4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AntonioAlmaT


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Mozingo Lake


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article about Mozingo Lake by AntonioAlmaT has a moderate amount of information. Although the information provided is helpful and important, the addition of further information would aid in making the article better than it currently is. From my analysis of the draft, all of the information is neutral, accurate, and useful in its placement within the article. I would recommend adding individual sections in order to provide further information to readers. The photos included in the article are useful and well-placed. All in all, I recommend adding further information in individual sections.