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Article evaluation ::
1) The article discusses relative ideas to the overall topic of body image. Ideas are well organized to where no additional information causes distractions to readers.

2) Article is neutral and doesn't contain any personal ideas or views.

3) All viewpoints are well presented in fair comparison to all others.

4) All links to citations work and supports the different claims that sum up the overall article of body image.

5) Relevant evidence to all claims given, Most information collected from journals or professional researchers.

6) Nothing is out of date, some additional links are missing to support claims.

7) Talk page is positive shows contributions to small parts of the article that further develop ideas.

8) rated as a start-class on quality and a mid-importance on importance

9) I believe this article contains as well as the overall function of Wikipedia really contains more depth than the material we cover in class. Wikipedia covers much more structures and rules.

==== FIRST EDIT (DRAFT) WEIGHT SECTION introducing the topic of anorexia nervosa and its relationship with body imaging - 1st source using ( http://www.thelancet.com/journals/lanpsy/article/PIIS2215-0366(15)00581-7/fulltext ) ==== Research by The Lancent Psychiatry discusses the relationship between mass media and eating disorders stating, "Body-image disturbance and weight and shape concerns are the result of an acculturation process spread through the therapeutic milieu and the mass media." The struggles caused by body imaging have led to the increase of Anorexia nervosa diagnosis. Anorexia nervosa is an eating disorder that results in significant weight loss due to a persons own distorted body image. Its increasing rate shows the correlation between the effects body imaging through social media has on people especially upon women and how it effects the measures of weight loss.

==== SECOND EDIT adding to sub section Figure Preferences of Measurement defining the word silhouettes and mentioning the idea adope photoshop with this source http://web.a.ebscohost.com/ehost/detail/detail?vid=0&sid=1d539162-5f98-4f55-bcb2-3670ba57a382%40sessionmgr4010&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWhvc3QtbGl2ZQ%3d%3d ==== In figure preferences the use of silhouettes is the most commonly used method.(EDIT) Silhouettes can be defined by a figures shape or dark outline upon a lighter background.(EDIT ENDS ) There are many issues with this method though; for one, the drawings are not realistic looking and were originally portrayed as adults so it made them unsuitable for children. Silhouettes are used to show to the subject and have them react to the different body types.(EDIT) In other perspectives many use Adobe Photoshop to fit their personal preference upon their body image, altering body tones, shape or size. (EDIT ENDS)

3RD EDIT in second paragraph of sub section of Ways to improve of Fashion industry using this source http://www.bbc.com/news/health-29569473
Health reporter Philippa of BBC News discusses how the introduction of more diversity upon body images can be a helpful factor into improving self confidence for all body types.