User:Anuragngoel/Romano-British culture/Jennashill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anuragngoel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Anuragngoel/Romano-British culture
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Romano-British culture

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article you are adding on to is currently missing many citations which you could improve by finding sources that would back up the articles claims.

The section that your are working on in your draft has a lot of ambiguous language use like, "it holds important evidence", and "it is known", which can be confusing for people to read. I would recommend expanding on those sentences and telling the reader exactly what the important evidence is, and how it connects to your topics, and by explaining what is known by writing what other authors have written about it.

The sources you added at the end of your draft are mainly encyclopedias. These can be helpful resources for starting research, but make sure to find source journal or articles to back up what the encyclopedias say. Dig deeper into the sources that the encyclopedias use and use Google Scholar to get peer-reviewed articles on your subject. Many books have been posted on the internet so you don't need to go to a library in person, but it may be helpful to search your topic in the U of W library and get access to those books online.

Adding links to other Wikipedia articles make your article stronger, so good call!

You could add examples of Celtic names and Latin names that have been found in the area.

The sentence "The history holds an important evidence for the relationship between both the cultures and shared impact on language communication." sounds like a concluding argumentative sentence, which is not necessary in Wiki articles because you are not arguing anything, so make sure you keep a neutral voice when writing.

That is good feedback, I will for sure look at the things you have highlighted. Thank you for giving me positive feedback.