User:Anushkagk/Interocular transfer/Delshad7 Peer Review

General info
Anushka Kulkarni
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Anushkagk/Interocular transfer
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead Section:
The introductory sentence was well structured that defined Interocular Transfer which will help any reader to understand the context. ***Suggestion: the lead could use navigation towards the rest of article to guide expectations of the readers such as early research, binocular vision and adaptation.***

Content
The information is highly relevant, introduces various aspects of IOT including Historical research. **Suggestion: The information of the recent studies were used before 2008, it night be beneficial to look for more recent research to provide more relevancy and depth.***

Tone and Balance
The article presents neutral information; controversial opening has been avoided. Well use of the sources.

Organization
Clear heading, flows to the next section - the paragraphs are perfectly laid out following the readers rhythm.

Also, there are no grammatical errors and spelling mistake.

Images and Media
Visual Illustration was a good call as it is always easier to understand a topic with visual aids.

Overall Impression
The article used useful information with visual aids, well researched peer reviewed sources, and content was linked to sources skillfully. The summary of the suggestions have been listed in points below:

- Navigation in the lead section

- More recent research (if available)

- Maybe includes more concepts of virtual therapies, VR point of view.

Great job Anushka! Good luck!