User:Anya.St.Z/Wangechi Mutu/Henrik30nyr Peer Review

General info
Anya.St.Z
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Anya.St.Z/Wangechi Mutu
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wangechi Mutu

Evaluate the drafted changes
Draft changes have added extensive detail to much of the previously written material and has sourced it well. The added changes have gone into greater depths about Wangechi Mutu’s work as an artist and has provided considerable updates about the intersectionality of her work with socio-political issues in the world today particularly as they affect Black women. I think the article may benefit from adding section headers and dividing it up, such as one section on her education and her early life, one on her work, one on her politics and so on.