User:Anyaeweber/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Acetes

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article to evaluate because it seemed like an article with a good start that just needed to be improved and expanded upon. It is important that information online about animals is correct so that we can understand their taxonomy and role on the earth.

Evaluate the article
This article did a good job staying neutral and only listing facts. One area of possible improvement is organization; the short introduction mentions the habitat of acetes and where they might live, however, these details are never expanded upon or mentioned again in the article. It might be better to break those up into different sections and provide more specifics and details. Another area to look at is proper citations. The article lists the common names of acetes in multiple different languages but there is no indication of where they got this information. On another note, the author did a very good job with the taxonomy and listed all 14 species, with sources. Overall, I think there could be more information provided in general. For example, the "life cycle" section is a total of 3 sentences. Despite the lack of detail, the article is accurate and informative.