User:Anysoberanis8/Infant ear piercing/Chelsea Isbister Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anysoberanis8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Anysoberanis8/Infant_ear_piercing?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Infant ear piercing
 * Infant ear piercing

Evaluate the drafted changes
There is nothing completed/documented in this sandbox draft, or the bibliography. However, I do believe the chosen article could be improved. The lead of the current article mentions that piercing infants' ears is common in various countries as a cultural practice, but does not speak about it an any subsections. It would be great to be able to add a bit about piercing in those countries!