User:Anyssa.pat/Medical device/MiguelMercado5 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Anyssa.pat


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 * User:Anyssa.pat/Medical device
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To improve the article, the author could provide more specific examples and data on the impact of medical equipment donations on different communities and regions. Additionally, the author could explore potential challenges and drawbacks of this approach, such as the potential for equipment to be outdated or unusable. I think you discussing the ethical issue will be interesting. The content added is relevant to the topic of medical equipment donations and their impact on healthcare access. The content appears to be up-to-date. The references used to support the topic you chose, they seem strong. The additions seem to be from a neutral point of view.