User:Aodum58/Cancel culture/Uhhlea Peer Review

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(Aodum58)
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I like the focus on cancel culture in education. It's not something I've seen talked before because this is a topic that is usually talked about within the realms of social media. I think you could make some of the sentences sound more neutral to avoid sounding too opinionated in the eyes of wikipedia, but that can be difficult on a topic like this. Maybe you could focus on the specific impacts of cancel culture and see if there are other sides to avoid this. All your sources appear to be pretty reliable. I see there is some coding issues (happened to me as well), but the professor should be able to help with this. I think you did a good job here with keeping each summarization concise and this is something I could apply to my own article as well. The last one does need a source, but overall it looks good.

Based on this review, I should make some of my summaries concise, add more sources to my sections, and be more neutral.