User:Apa5230/Cloud gaming/Judyng1 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)

I am reviewing Apa5230's article.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:

User:Apa5230/Cloud gaming

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

The lead has a good introductory sentence that talks about his topic.


 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?

They explain what cloud gaming is about.


 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?

The Lead talk a bit more about what cloud gaming is.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?

The introductory the Lead has added gives the read a bit more context about the topic. In the article is just had on introductory sentence about the topic.


 * How can the content added be improved?

The Lead can probably add more about why cloud gaming is better than physical console gaming.