User:Aphroditia/Dr. Jay de Soca Prince/Bananaapplekiwi Peer Review

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Hii Aphroditia

Everything is easy to understand and follow, and it is an excellent introduction to Dr. Jay. de Soca Prince.

Although the whole page is great, here are just a few pieces of feedback that will make the page even better:


 * The Award chart is amazing, easy to read and follow and attracts readers. However, the citations for awards in 2003 and 2004 are missing.
 * The part about Personal Life is too short, and I wonder if combining it with the Early Life part is possible. Or maybe add more info to Personal Life, for example, about their spouse or Caribbean background.
 * I think more Wikipedia Hyperlinks would be helpful as well. Some terms and words are unknown; for example, you could still hyperlink Georgetown, Calypso, and Kaiso (if any related Wikipedia page exists).
 * Also, there is a subheading as Events with no content below it. Maybe you should remove that?
 * My last feedback/recommendation is to add a photo of him.
 * Have you considered adding a sound piece or part of their podcast to the page? Wikipedia has the option of adding sounds.
 * The references number 4 and 5 are not properly done. There are some error-looking texts in the citation.
 * The references 8, 8,9, and 10 are the same, so two should be removed.
 * The image on the page has a text below it that I think is missing some words. Maybe you meant "for" instead of "or"?
 * Also, it is not clear whether he has passed away or is still alive. Maybe you should mention that somewhere in the text.

Other than the feedback above, everything was great and engaging.

Good luck,

Sana