User:Apiodavila/Social and environmental impact of palm oil/Munachiokoro1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Pio


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Apiodavila/Social_and_environmental_impact_of_palm_oil?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social and environmental impact of palm oil
 * Social and environmental impact of palm oil

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- I like your draft because it is really concise meaning it isn't overly detailed. It has just the right amount of the information for your audience.

- I also like the fact that you explained what SPOTT is and what they actualy do instead of only just providing a link to the webpage.

- I believe how you citied your references/sources is correct and it conforms to the wikipedia guidelines which is good.

- I also liked the fact you added an image to further bolster your article/draft but I think having a small write-up about it would definetely help your audience get clarity on the image.

- The sources that you chose are current which is really good menaing that they aren't outdated, and they both reflect your topic sentence.

The only takeaway I have for you is if you have more time you could look into more sources to help your draft because having two sources limits how much you can actually add to the article.