User:Apocketfullofsunshinee/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
I am evaluating the article for Mac Miller

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have been a fan of Mac Miller for a while, and also would like to spread more awareness for substance abuse. This article is could be better organized and thought out to make it more detailed and well rounded.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)


 * C-Class article
 * The opening overview may be slightly over explained and detailed, Not focusing on the main overview of the topic
 * Article could be set up to be more clear
 * The dates and early life could be better sectioned to be able to read and understand the dates of each event better
 * Talk page: speaks about musical classifications being misinformation and incorrect
 * Very little put into personal life, focuses more on substances than other things done in his life.
 * Sources in beginning of article are lacking, No sources really start until first topic.
 * Check over some of sources to see truth
 * Add more onto romances Ariana Grande, Niomi Leasure
 * Attempt to find out who completed Millers last albums
 * music progression section can be added to
 * Defendants in trial info is incorrect
 * Lack of consistency on substance abuse