User:Apocketfullofsunshinee/Mac Miller/Bibliography

Proposal
For the article I am editing for Wikipedia, I chose the article on rapper and music producer “Mac Miller.” For this article there are a couple things I would like to try and help improve and add to make this article better overall. To begin, I would like to incorporate some of Miller’s most popular songs ranked into the leading statement information about his albums and music. I would also like to better improve the early life portion of the article. Although this section is well detailed, it comes across slightly jumbled, as they are all grouped on certain years. The beginning section “1992–2010: Early life and career beginnings” barely even speaks on his 2010 life as a whole and should just be split up into his beginning life and 2010 being in its own section. They also pass 2010 into “2010–2013: Breakthrough, Blue Slide Park and Watching Movies with the Sound Off” which can make it easier to fix this. The article lacks some detailing information on certain topics such as Miller's personal life. They speak majority on his drug use and don’t speak much on his relationships such as his personal assistant also being his sober coach. They have left out much information on certain romantic relationships, which are good elements to add to personal life. Additionally, I would like to slightly edit the sentencing of men in the case of his death, to make them more specific and accurate according to articles. I will be able to loop all the changes back to the sources I have found.