User:Apocketfullofsunshinee/Mac Miller/KingRice27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Apocketfullofsunshinee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Apocketfullofsunshinee/Mac Miller
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mac Miller
 * Mac Miller

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Overall, you have a good number of sources and references, and your information looks good and everything your adding is a good touch to the article. just remember the section names and you can also add the wiki links to words but its good and I like it.


 * Also, you can add wiki links to other words if there's more articles on them
 * Remember that the Section names, only the first word is capitalized. For example, Personal life