User:Apollo1997/Sport psychology/Dalia Arafat5221 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Apollo1997


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Apollo1997/Sport_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of this article is already concise and summarizes/introduces the main topics throughout the article. I'm not sure if the sentence "Otherwise, sport is considered as any physical activity where the individuals engage for competition and health." is really necessary for the lead though. The section on the role of a sports psychologist was a good addition. The only thing is, I would recommend using various sources as opposed to one, especially since you added quite a bit of new information.

The sentences "If someone is playing poorly then it is possible the athlete will end up thinking less of themselves and having lower self-worth. Playing sports in general, and doing some form of physical activity already immediately makes people think of themselves as more than which is shown by research" should include a citation. You mention "research" at the end but you'll probably need to specify a piece of research that supports these claims. You could probably cut down the "Imagery" section, especially the first half of the first paragraph in this section.