User:Apollo1997/Sport psychology/Lagg0515 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Apollo1997


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Apollo1997/Sport_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sport psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Jake, I think your editions on professional sports are great. I would just piggyback off of what Dr. Rahn said and cut some of the information that is not specifically relevant to sports psychology. One thing to consider is the 4 Key Aspects of Sports Psychology section. The formatting of this section of the article is very different from the rest of the article, I would consider editing this portion to have more cohesion throughout the article. Your source was great, I would just consider finding a more recently published source to strengthen your claims. Generally, good sources are published within 10 years of the current date. Overall, great job at adding some relevant information.