User:Apolloh01/Dual process model of coping/P. Oncology Peer Review

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 * User:Apolloh01/Dual process model of coping
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 * Dual process model of coping

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, changes vastly expand on original article. Citations are used effectively.

Good idea to get rid of the section on the Bible and Freud.

Good introduction of Oscillation section under the Dual Process Model. It's surprising that it doesn't yet exist. Right now, it's a little reliant on the source by Fiore et al., 2019, so it needs to be expanded a little.

Grammatical and syntax/diction changes to original article are welcome.

Overall, very comprehensive elaboration on a article which is sorely lacking in information. A few more sources will be needed to round out the information.