User:Apothecartea/Roxxie/Bmarra Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TeamTalonflame


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like this draft! Great use of source material and I like how you laid out the sections in a very clear manner.

I'm not sure what the first section is whether it's an introduction so that could be more clear.

References were very clear and well documented. I liked the list of works as well as the details about her major artistic contributions! I think that is really important to understand!

I know personal information is hard to find but I hope you can find some more of it.

Great job!