User:Apple063/Students for Life of America/Flyer2004 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Apple063


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Apple063/Students for Life of America
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Students for Life of America

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your lead section is very strong and clear! My only suggestion would be to specifically name the leader of the organization in the lead section rather than just stating "her". Overall, your lead section sets up your contributions nicely.

For the Legal Issues section, maybe you could consider expanding on the Boise State issue so it is not such a quick transition to the recent development with Yale. Also maybe you could consider linking the video of the parody itself as one of your sources so that Wiki users could easily access it. You definitely meet your notability requirements and the section reads very well.

I think the Post-Roe section is an important add. It is great that you are helping keep this page updated. Great job overall!