User:Apple1223/Formula One Esports Series/Judyng1 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)

I am supposed to be reviewing Apple1223's article draft but I can't find it.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:

User:Apple1223/Choose an Article

I was only able to find this.

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

I'm not sure if the Lead has updated it or I just can't find it.


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?

I think this article is very interesting. It would be very nice if the introductory talks about how the Formula One Esports Series all started.


 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?

The article contains only the introductory and the history but it would be nice to learn more like the locations it took place in despite just saying worldwide.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?

The article is still incomplete in my eyes. I feel like there can be so much more that can be added onto it.