User:Applegirl1234/Shadow play/Tedamala012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Applegirl1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Applegirl1234/Shadow play


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Shadow play

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content is well reflected in the citations provided. There are some minor grammar errors, for example Japanese not javanese in the paragraph about malaysia (unless it was intentional). The organization by country makes the article more put together, since the topic of discussion exists in various countries, and nothing appears as biased or opinionated since the article is informational. The writing seems clear and straight to the point, but sections for certain countries could use more depth to the history. Overall the article is good.