User:Applesandbanana/Flower in the Crannied Wall/Yazzymine688 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Applesandbananas


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Applesandbanana/Flower in the Crannied Wall
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Flower in the Crannied Wall

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I enjoy the context that the editor added, I believe that it provides greater breadth to Whitman's poem. The content has improved the overall quality of the article, and it could be improved with an explanation of the meter and rhyme scheme of the poem.