User:Appletastic/Juno (film)/Betty1324 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Appletastic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Juno (film)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Juno (film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I was not able to find a draft of their work in their sandbox. Based on the article itself that is publish, I do think that it is very well formatted and neutral. t has a clear lead and structure that allows the reader to clearly understand.