User:Appo.20/Broadway theatre/Juliad333 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Appo.20 and DanielleMargarite)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Appo.20/Broadway_theatre?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Broadway theatre

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

An idea might be to add an image of a celebrity involved in the movement toward raising money for HIV/AIDS.

The added content is easy to read and presented in a clear voice. The section where additional background/historical information was added is helpful in introducing the topic and building a solid base of information. The added content under “broadway cares/fighting aids” is up to date and are among current events relative to the topic.